jeudi 28 mai 2020

Conseils pour la synthèses 1


Conseils pour l’entraînement à la méthodologie de la synthèse CCP 

La méthodologie de la synthèse de documents s’apprend. Il faut bien connaître sa technique et ses règles.
Points sur lesquels doit porter l’entraînement :
– La lecture approfondie des textes pour bien s’imprégner de la thématique abordée et éviter les erreurs de compréhension et les déformations d’éléments d’information.
– Le relevé exhaustif (au sein d’un tableau à colonnes éventuellement ou en les surlignant avec des couleurs différentes pour chaque texte) des idées clés de chaque document permettant de mettre en relief leurs similitudes et leurs divergences et pouvoir ainsi organiser leur synthèse facilement.
– La mise en évidence de la problématique par croisement de ces idées (i.e par confrontation des similitudes et des oppositions) et non linéairement dans le déroulé chronologique des textes.
– Le choix du titre, qui ne doit intervenir qu’après avoir dégagé la problématique et qui doit en être l’expression claire et simple.

– La rédaction d’une petite introduction présentant les sources (en respectant scrupuleusement les codes) et la problématique.
– La sélection parmi les données, statistiques ou autres, illustrant les idées clés (surtout si elles sont nombreuses), de celles qui paraissent les plus significatives, les plus frappantes ou tout simplement les plus faciles à comprendre pour soi-même en premier lieu. Ne jamais mentionner une statistique si l’on n’est pas sûr de l’avoir clairement comprise.
– La rédaction d’une petite conclusion bilan à condition d’être sûr de ne pas y intégrer d’ajout d’information, d’opinion ou de jugement personnel
Il faudra :
– s’assurer d’exploiter tous les documents du corpus y compris le document iconographique s’il y en a un.
veiller à équilibrer le contenu : ne pas développer exagérément une partie au détriment du reste et ne pas accorder une importance démesurée à l’un des textes par rapport aux autres.
utiliser exclusivement les informations fournies dans le corpus et se garder d’allonger indûment le texte, notamment l’introduction, par des ajouts d’éléments, aussi culturels soient-ils, ou des opinions personnelles.

Conseils à suivre pour améliorer l’approche de l’exercice :
Nous répèterons les conseils suivants :
– Bien se relire pour corriger les fautes éventuelles et présenter sa pensée de façon cohérente et dynamique.
– Respecter les consignes de décompte des mots.
– Soigner sa présentation, aérer le texte en créant des paragraphes, écrire lisiblement.
– S’appliquer à écrire un anglais syntaxiquement correct dans un texte articulé par des mots de liaison appropriés et bien utilisés.
– Réviser sérieusement les bases grammaticales.
–A pprendre des tournures efficaces et concises appropriées à l’exercice de synthèse.
– Lire régulièrement la presse anglo-saxonne pour acquérir du vocabulaire et avoir de meilleures bases culturelles. La lecture de plusieurs journaux différents fera acquérir l’habitude de voir un même sujet traité sous différents angles et portant différents éclairages sur le sujet. C’est un bon entraînement à l’épreuve de synthèse.

dimanche 5 avril 2020

Synthese Scientists and Extinction Rebellion


Calling for action on climate change

             For decades, scientists have been studying the effects of global warming and raising the/ alarm about the scale of the crisis.  Now, they speak out to denounce the decision-makers’ inaction and join the/rest of the population in their fight to be heard.  The documents at hand include an article taken from The Scientist,/a column written by two academics, Claire Wordley and Charles Gardner for The Guardian along with the picture of a mural probably done / by Bansky, posted on hypebeast.com and they are all dated /2019.  They raise the following question: what can be done to force governments to act?

             Traditionally, the role of scientists/ has been to provide information and trust political leaders to take action based on their research. As indicated in/ The Guardian, their goal is to raise public awareness to current issues like the extinction of species and ecosystems and the/ rising threat of global warming. However, according to Julia Steinberger, an ecological economist quoted in The Scientist their role must now be /redefined and they need to be actively involved in public protest.



               As a result, scientists based in London have signed/ a document in support of Extinction Rebellion, a group whose goal is to denounce political inaction on climate change. Claire Wodesley and /Charles Gardner in The Guardian also point out that a number of scientists have become member of Extinction Rebellion which advocates non-violent civil/ disobedience that in the past was used by historical figures such as Ghandi or Rosa Parks. In addition, Banksy’s mural, which/ depicts a young girl holding the Extinction Rebellion logo featuring an hourglass within a circle. She  embodies the younger generation who also use/ civil disobedience to challenge the decision-makers’ inaction. Similarly, the Guardian underlines the fact that people from all generations and social/ backgrounds have joined the movement.



                The scale and urgency of the crisis should not be underestimated as Julia Steinberger states    in/ The Scientist.  And it is all the more urgent to force governments to take action as the oil and gas industry/ are still extremely powerful and have a great influence on policymakers as indicated in The Guardian. Banksy’s mural conveys/ the same message: now is the time to act, to use “tactics”such as activism and peaceful protest to achieve what needs to be done.



        Civil/ disobedience has become a way for scientists and the population in general to express their protests and to urge governments/ to face up to their responsibilities.



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dimanche 15 mars 2020

DM March 27 Extinction Rebellion dossier and notes from class

DOSSIER




Document 1

Signatories of the declaration say the need for governments to act on human-driven climate change is too urgent to stay silent.
Oct 15, 2019 The scientist
Almost 1,000 scientists have signed a declaration supporting civil disobedience protests that urge government action on climate change.
“We believe that the continued governmental inaction over the climate and ecological crisis now justifies peaceful and non-violent protest and direct action, even if this goes beyond the bounds of the current law,” Emily Grossman, the first signatory of the declaration and a science broadcaster with a PhD in molecular biology, announced during a protest on Saturday (October 12), according to Reuters. Grossman, accompanied by other signatories, read the declaration outside London’s Science Museum in Kensington. 
“We therefore support those who are rising up peacefully against governments around the world that are failing to act proportionately to the scale of the crisis,” she said. 
Grossman and the others who drafted the declaration support the Extinction Rebellion, a non-violent environmental pressure group that formed in the UK about a year ago to protest government inaction on the ecological crises caused by climate change. The group, which sparked similar groups in dozens of countries around the world, has had more than 1,400 protesters arrested in London in the last week alone, and police ousted activists from Trafalgar Square on Monday (October 14), the Associated Press reports.
“We can’t allow the role of scientists to be to just write papers and publish them in obscure journals and hope somehow that somebody out there will pay attention,” Julia Steinberger, an ecological economist at the University of Leeds and a lead author of the sixth Intergovernmental Panel on Climate Change report, tells Reuters.  
“We need to be rethinking the role of the scientist and engage with how social change happens at a massive and urgent scale,” she says. “We can’t allow science as usual.” 

Document 2 

We scientists must rise up to prevent the climate crisis. Words aren’t enough
Our profession has been great at raising awareness. But this alone won’t succeed against the might of the oil and gas lobbyists
As scientists, we tend to operate under an unspoken assumption – that our job is to provide the world with factual information, and if we do so our leaders will use it to make wise decisions. But what if that assumption is wrong? For decades, conservation scientists like us have been telling the world that species and ecosystems are disappearing, and that their loss will have devastating impacts on humanity. Meanwhile, climate scientists have been warning that the continued burning of fossil fuels and destruction of natural carbon sinks, such as forests and peatlands, will lead to catastrophic planetary heating.
We have collectively written tens of thousands of peer-reviewed papers, and shared our findings with policymakers and the public. And, on the face of it, we seem to have done a pretty good job: after all, we all know about the environmental and climate crises, don’t we?
But while we’re now well informed, we haven’t actually changed course. Biodiversity loss proceeds apace, to the extent that a million species face extinction in the coming decades, and we continue to pump carbon into the atmosphere at ever faster rates. It seems that knowledge alone cannot trigger the radical global changes we so urgently need.
It was this realisation that incited us both to embrace activism, and to take to the streets and engage in non-violent civil disobedience as members of Extinction Rebellion. The refusal to obey certain laws has a long and glorious history: from the suffragettes to Rosa Parks and Gandhi, many of the 20th century’s greatest heroes engaged in non-violent civil disobedience to win their rights.
Today, civil disobedience is again on the rise. And it is working. The protests that shut down four sites in London in April raised the climate crisis rapidly up the political agenda, and into the public consciousness. The environment is now the third most pressing issue for British voters, above the economy, crime and immigration: the UK parliament and half the country’s local councils have declared a climate emergency, and a zero-carbon target has been enshrined into law. We don’t know what policy change will follow, but it is an encouraging start.
Young people have embraced the movement, and grandparents, too. So have doctors and lawyers, farmers and unemployed people. But not many scientists, which is odd given we probably know more about the severity of the problems we face than anybody. Perhaps it’s related to an unspoken assumption that if our job is to provide information, then adopting a position will weaken our authority. In fact, research shows it doesn’t.
Alternatively, scientists may be reluctant to rise up because there are “proper” channels for influencing policy: you can vote, you can write letters and sign petitions, and if things get really desperate you can walk from A to B on a sanctioned march. The trouble is, these avenues aren’t working, and lobbyists for fossil-fuel industries have far greater access to political decision-makers. In 2018, for example, oil and gas lobbyists alone spent more than $125m (£100m) lobbying politicians in just one country, the United States.
As scientists we have spent years telling policymakers that we must change course, but they haven’t taken action. They may be starting to now, but only because people have engaged in open rebellion, making it clear that we will no longer accept inaction. Surely scientists have a moral duty to join the masses, and rebel for life.
Claire Wordley is a postdoctoral research associate at the University of Cambridge, Charlie Gardner is a lecturer in conservation biology at the University of Kent


Document 3
Image result for banksy extinction rebellion
Extinction Rebellion Mural Could Be a New Banksy Artwork, Expert Claims Recently spotted at the climate activists’ Marble Ach base in central London. Apr 26, 2019  hypebeast.com


Class notes to help you:


1.       An article taken from The Scientist, dated October 2019 – an opinion piece /a column (written) by Claire Wordley, a researcher at the University of Cambridge, published in The Guardian in September 2019 along with a photo of a Bansky artwork posted on
hypebeast.com in April 2019.

2.       Document 1: 

-          A group of scientist have signed a document
-          They aim to denounce government inaction on climate change
-          They support civil disobedience = peaceful protest

-          Extinction Rebellion = a group of activists whose goal is to denounce gvt inaction on climate change
-          Originated in the UK, then spread worldwide

According to Julia Steinberger, an ecological economist, the role of scientists must be redefined. Scientists need to be actively involved in public protest. She highlights the scale of the crisis

Document 2: Claire Wordley : put the paragraphs in the correct order

-          People from all generations and social backgrounds have joined Extinction Rebellion. However, many scientists are still unwilling (reluctant) to get involved. They believe that their role is only to provide information. But oil and gas industry are much more powerful and have a greater influence on policymakers, hence the necessity for scientists to take action and rebel openly against government inaction. 3
-          A successful (an effective) means of action. In the UK, policymakers (decision-makers) and the public acknowledge that the environment must be a priority. 4
-          Traditionally, the role of scientists has been to provide information and trust political leaders to take action based on their research. Their goal was to raise public awareness to current issues like the extinction of species and ecosystems and the rising threat of global warming. 1
-          Yet little is being done to tackle the environmental crisis. As a result, scientists like CW have become members of Extinction Rebellion which advocates non-violent civil disobedience. ( a historical means of protest –Gandhi, Rosa Parks… )2



Document 3: Bansky’s mural : A completer….

The mural depicts

 Next to her there is 

 A message on the wall says: “

The young girl embodies  (incarne)                                       who

The small growing plant symbolizes

 The artwork highlights


 

Conseils pour la synthèses 1

Conseils pour l’entraînement à la méthodologie de la synthèse CCP  La méthodologie de la synthèse de documents s’apprend. Il faut bi...